Sunday, November 11, 2007

Your Own Disaster.


Twist a strand, break it free
Can you see? What you’re doing to me?

The puzzle’s chaotic and the placing’s wrong.
Such a hapless mess; Such a tuneless song.

What do you see? Did you hear me fall?
I've tried to flee but you make me crawl.

The paper’s blank and I’m out of ink;
I want to swim - but I guess I’ll sink.

I’d stand my ground, but the earth is swaying;
I’d call you out, but I don’t know what I’m saying.

What’s that in your eyes? Is it dread? Is it fear?
I think I’ve lost control - Could you be the one to steer?

The air is crisp but my words are slurred;
You’re standing so close, and I can’t be heard.

Drowning yourself in a desperate fantasy;
Blindfolding yourself and pretending you can see.

So many illusions - all up in smoke;
I think I burnt with every word you spoke.

Convincing delusions of a brand new start -
But it’s in with your dagger
And out with my heart.

7 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Very deep.
Nice job!

10:07 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

luvd it
seriously

1:01 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

u really are talented
tis was very good

6:49 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Wellll I don't do this much but that was GOOD!!

1:12 PM  
Blogger still life said...

hey really like ur blog i hope you dont mind me adding u to my fav

12:34 AM  
Blogger weevil girl said...

i love your blog
you have a way with words,lady

this was gggreat.
x]

5:49 AM  
Blogger Souljacker said...

=|
thanks?

1:06 AM  

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